Post by Veta on Mar 4, 2010 18:20:34 GMT -6
My Chemistry teacher gave me 8 victims and what they should die from. It was up to me to name those victims and make them all die at the same time. I couldn't have anyone alive, but due to constant nagng from COGS, I'm forced to make an alternative ending.
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Chemistry Major Writing Assignment
Police Report by Detective Mercer, composed on December 27, 2009.
There was a very bizarre incident on Christmas Eve. Apparently, eight victims were reported to have died at nearly the same time. They were all together for a Christmas Eve party at Ace’s Foods and Drinks, when this unfortunate tragedy struck. I will detail on all eight victims in this report.
The first victim is Jon Taylor, a young man in his 19s. Victim is white, with short black hair and camo outfit. His weight is around 142. From what I can see here, he was in a struggle, due to the bruises and such, and his arm was penetrated with a needle containing cocaine. The cocaine entered his bloodstream and ultimately killed him. He was found alone in the Ace’s Foods and Drinks men’s restroom, hunched over a sink.
The second victim is Mike Rhodes, a middle-aged Caucasian man at 42 years old. He weighs at aprox. 469 pounds. He wears thick-rimmed glasses along with an untidy medium-sized brown hair, and wears a white buttoned shirt tucked in his pants. He died due to a heart attacked caused by the chocolate in his stomach and vanilla around his lips. How, details are vague. Area of death is right at the entrance of Ace’s Food and Drinks.
The third victim is Carter Chiller. This teenager’s age is 17, and he wears a causal jacket with a spiked brown hair and lightly tanned white skin. He weighs in at 130 pounds. He was found dead in bed, with codeine shattered all across the bed and room. The man took codeine and became hyperactive, dying with a wide grin on his face.
The fourth victim is a 23 year old female named Amy Fields. She was found with another dead body, presumed to be her boyfriend. Her hair color is blonde and she weighs in at 110 pounds. Her skin color is white. Upon investigating her purse, a phone containing Garry’s Mod (A computer game) and a jewelry box filled with Nitrogen substances were found, along with other belongings. Autopsy revealed shocking levels of nitrogen in her bloodstream. It was presumed she was exposed to a source of this gas and died from it.
Victim number 5 is a rebellious teenager at the age of 19, who was with Jon Taylor at the night of his death. His name is Jaymez Burns, and he is a mixed ethic of white and Asian. He have an almost-bald buzz cut, and is dressed in loose white T-shirt and parachute pants, as well with necklaces and rings, commonly referred as to “Bling-blings.” His man-purse contained many interesting things, least of all those a syringe filled with cocaine, cigarettes, a box of matches, and the remains of TNT. During his trip to the table for food, a match ignited in his bag and blew half his stomach across the windows. He then bled out and died a full minute later, after an attempt to reattach a rib to his spine. The explosion also caused pipework on the ceiling above him to rupture, releasing deathly gas into the room.
The sixth victim, a white male by the name of Eric Thompson, weighed in at 207 pounds, is dressed up in what is apparently hobo outfit. His wallet, which contained his address and a classic sugar substance called Sweetn’ Low, seemed to suggest otherwise. He was found dead stumped over a table, sitting on a chair. Autopsy showed that this person had consumed large amounts of alcohol and proceeded to sniff Sweetn’ Low. The substance went into his brain and shot it, a dangerous thing combined with alcohol.
Victim number seven is Matt Starsky. He is a fine gentleman at age 25, sporting a semi-formal shirt, jeans, and a pair of dress shoes. He is white and have a medium and brown gelled hair. He was found next to victim number four, and investigation in his pocket revealed a bottle of dimetacrine and a packet of curare. Due to the presence of the anti-depressant, we can clearly observe that the couple was going through a hard time at the night of their ultimate death. He mistook curare for dimetacrine and the substance parlayed his throat, making him unable to breathe.
The last victim, victim number eight, is known as Patrick Green, a man of French origins. He is dressed in a suit, and seemed to be celebrating Christmas Eve alone. He was sitting at a corner of Ace’s Food and Drinks, and overdosed on Tylenol pills. Those pills was part of the current recall, apparently contaminated with cyanide. He was found peacefully at rest, with the bottle overturned at the table.
Needless to say, there was a hell of a party two days ago, and Ace, the owner, had just scraped the last of body bits out of the window. Once again, I repeat this unusual coincidence: They all died at the same time. I suggest we keep this case open and exanimate crime items, in hopes of catching whoever planned for this to happen.
A. Mercer
Lt. Detective.
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ALTERNATIVE ENDING
It seems there was a lot of blood at Ace's Foods and Drink, but everyone survived and was taken to the hospital. But Kong remains dead.
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Chemistry Major Writing Assignment
Police Report by Detective Mercer, composed on December 27, 2009.
There was a very bizarre incident on Christmas Eve. Apparently, eight victims were reported to have died at nearly the same time. They were all together for a Christmas Eve party at Ace’s Foods and Drinks, when this unfortunate tragedy struck. I will detail on all eight victims in this report.
The first victim is Jon Taylor, a young man in his 19s. Victim is white, with short black hair and camo outfit. His weight is around 142. From what I can see here, he was in a struggle, due to the bruises and such, and his arm was penetrated with a needle containing cocaine. The cocaine entered his bloodstream and ultimately killed him. He was found alone in the Ace’s Foods and Drinks men’s restroom, hunched over a sink.
The second victim is Mike Rhodes, a middle-aged Caucasian man at 42 years old. He weighs at aprox. 469 pounds. He wears thick-rimmed glasses along with an untidy medium-sized brown hair, and wears a white buttoned shirt tucked in his pants. He died due to a heart attacked caused by the chocolate in his stomach and vanilla around his lips. How, details are vague. Area of death is right at the entrance of Ace’s Food and Drinks.
The third victim is Carter Chiller. This teenager’s age is 17, and he wears a causal jacket with a spiked brown hair and lightly tanned white skin. He weighs in at 130 pounds. He was found dead in bed, with codeine shattered all across the bed and room. The man took codeine and became hyperactive, dying with a wide grin on his face.
The fourth victim is a 23 year old female named Amy Fields. She was found with another dead body, presumed to be her boyfriend. Her hair color is blonde and she weighs in at 110 pounds. Her skin color is white. Upon investigating her purse, a phone containing Garry’s Mod (A computer game) and a jewelry box filled with Nitrogen substances were found, along with other belongings. Autopsy revealed shocking levels of nitrogen in her bloodstream. It was presumed she was exposed to a source of this gas and died from it.
Victim number 5 is a rebellious teenager at the age of 19, who was with Jon Taylor at the night of his death. His name is Jaymez Burns, and he is a mixed ethic of white and Asian. He have an almost-bald buzz cut, and is dressed in loose white T-shirt and parachute pants, as well with necklaces and rings, commonly referred as to “Bling-blings.” His man-purse contained many interesting things, least of all those a syringe filled with cocaine, cigarettes, a box of matches, and the remains of TNT. During his trip to the table for food, a match ignited in his bag and blew half his stomach across the windows. He then bled out and died a full minute later, after an attempt to reattach a rib to his spine. The explosion also caused pipework on the ceiling above him to rupture, releasing deathly gas into the room.
The sixth victim, a white male by the name of Eric Thompson, weighed in at 207 pounds, is dressed up in what is apparently hobo outfit. His wallet, which contained his address and a classic sugar substance called Sweetn’ Low, seemed to suggest otherwise. He was found dead stumped over a table, sitting on a chair. Autopsy showed that this person had consumed large amounts of alcohol and proceeded to sniff Sweetn’ Low. The substance went into his brain and shot it, a dangerous thing combined with alcohol.
Victim number seven is Matt Starsky. He is a fine gentleman at age 25, sporting a semi-formal shirt, jeans, and a pair of dress shoes. He is white and have a medium and brown gelled hair. He was found next to victim number four, and investigation in his pocket revealed a bottle of dimetacrine and a packet of curare. Due to the presence of the anti-depressant, we can clearly observe that the couple was going through a hard time at the night of their ultimate death. He mistook curare for dimetacrine and the substance parlayed his throat, making him unable to breathe.
The last victim, victim number eight, is known as Patrick Green, a man of French origins. He is dressed in a suit, and seemed to be celebrating Christmas Eve alone. He was sitting at a corner of Ace’s Food and Drinks, and overdosed on Tylenol pills. Those pills was part of the current recall, apparently contaminated with cyanide. He was found peacefully at rest, with the bottle overturned at the table.
Needless to say, there was a hell of a party two days ago, and Ace, the owner, had just scraped the last of body bits out of the window. Once again, I repeat this unusual coincidence: They all died at the same time. I suggest we keep this case open and exanimate crime items, in hopes of catching whoever planned for this to happen.
A. Mercer
Lt. Detective.
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ALTERNATIVE ENDING
It seems there was a lot of blood at Ace's Foods and Drink, but everyone survived and was taken to the hospital. But Kong remains dead.